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A user with 414 edits. Account created on 4 May 2010.
29 January 2020
- 18:2518:25, 29 January 2020 diff hist +172 List of 5G NR networks Made clear some on the list are very limited. Tag: Visual edit
14 January 2020
- 11:0911:09, 14 January 2020 diff hist −703 m Michael Connelly removed several extraneous references to #1 bestseller, etc. Did not change substance. Tag: Visual edit
1 December 2019
- 10:0210:02, 1 December 2019 diff hist +203 Talk:5G No edit summary
- 09:5909:59, 1 December 2019 diff hist +212 m 5G Added citation, corrected typo. Tag: Visual edit
- 09:5209:52, 1 December 2019 diff hist +3,116 5G Added requested introduction and made numerous updates based on more recent field results. Many more updates and citations are required. I will do what I can when I can. Please help. Dave Burstein, wirelessone.news Tag: Visual edit
26 November 2019
- 04:4004:40, 26 November 2019 diff hist −1,648 Ross Perot Jr. Removed pr and non-notable stuff Tag: Visual edit
23 November 2019
- 23:4423:44, 23 November 2019 diff hist −1 m Oromo people typo
9 November 2019
- 03:1803:18, 9 November 2019 diff hist −96 Center Forward "Centrist" is an undefined, non-neutral term. The actual positions could be considered "conservative" or "centrist," illuatrating that centrist is not a beutral or objective term.
13 October 2019
- 00:2600:26, 13 October 2019 diff hist −33 Wish (company) Deleted questionable content and hence tags Tag: COI template removed
- 00:2300:23, 13 October 2019 diff hist −1,415 Wish (company) Removed outdated info Tag: Visual edit: Switched
22 September 2019
- 14:4114:41, 22 September 2019 diff hist +187 m American Skin (film) Rearranged order of quotes to show opinions on both sides equally. Added quote from Sawiris Tag: Visual edit
- 10:5410:54, 22 September 2019 diff hist −21 m Lucent Technologies No edit summary
10 September 2019
- 06:1906:19, 10 September 2019 diff hist +587 Talk:Elliott Investment Management explained changes
- 06:1406:14, 10 September 2019 diff hist −2,621 Elliott Investment Management Removed claims of investment gains that were not backed up by any public accounting. Removed comment by (now) financial pr guy for activist funds made shortly before he left NY Times after plagiarism claims. Removed duplicate reference on AT&T comment. Tag: Visual edit
27 August 2019
- 01:3801:38, 27 August 2019 diff hist −124 m Midsomer Murders Removed unsourced opinion Tag: Visual edit
23 August 2019
- 04:3104:31, 23 August 2019 diff hist −1,275 Devra Davis Removed repetitive and less significant items. Linked to related wikipedia article. did not change substance.
1 August 2019
- 16:1016:10, 1 August 2019 diff hist +1 m Juan Pablo Jofre typo
30 July 2019
- 23:0623:06, 30 July 2019 diff hist +942 User talk:Horse Eye Jack No edit summary
- 23:0023:00, 30 July 2019 diff hist +852 Talk:Huawei No edit summary
- 22:5622:56, 30 July 2019 diff hist +691 User talk:The Mirror Cracked No edit summary
- 22:5422:54, 30 July 2019 diff hist −1,693 Huawei Per comments, reviewed my changes and accepted reversions in many cases. Did pull old non-neutral and possibly inaccurate claims, such as Nortel can crucial government support. Because "white label" is much less important today, I replaced "provides" with "has provided."
- 05:2005:20, 30 July 2019 diff hist +417 Talk:Huawei No edit summary
- 05:1505:15, 30 July 2019 diff hist −4,931 Huawei Removed outdated references 2000-2015, most of which were probably inaccurate.
16 June 2019
- 14:4214:42, 16 June 2019 diff hist −333 m UNISOC Removed outdated 2011 reference. Tag: Visual edit
8 June 2019
- 22:4322:43, 8 June 2019 diff hist −5 m 5G Minor updates Tag: Visual edit
- 06:3406:34, 8 June 2019 diff hist +279 Self-driving car Added "autonomous cars do not need 5G, citing a Ford expert Tag: Visual edit
- 06:1506:15, 8 June 2019 diff hist −195 m Michael Morell removed superfluous, unsourced, non-neutral comments that added nothing to article substance. Tag: Visual edit
22 May 2019
- 05:4505:45, 22 May 2019 diff hist −52 m Huawei Restored minor detail mistakenly changed in prior edit. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2405:24, 22 May 2019 diff hist +729 m User talk:ViperSnake151 Daveburstein (talk) 05:06, 22 May 2019 (UTC) While making a major edit to reduce the text from 6,000 words, a conflict developed about which I have no opinion. See right above. A short note about ownership was added and reversed. I invite either of the editors to improve the article as you see fit. Daveburstein (talk) 05:06, 22 May 2019 (UTC) Reduced 6,000 word article to 3,500. Removed dozens of outdated references, many from before 2010. Removed puffery. Cut detail such as lengthy product list
- 05:1905:19, 22 May 2019 diff hist +412 m User talk:Rogerd Reduced 6,000 word article to 3,500. Removed dozens of outdated references, many from before 2010. Removed puffery. Cut detail such as lengthy product lists. Modest changes to make article neutral. I believe I did not change substance. daveb@dslprime.com happy to share information. I'm a telecom reporter.
- 05:1705:17, 22 May 2019 diff hist +341 m User talk:Scio c Reduced 6,000 word article to 3,500. Removed dozens of outdated references, many from before 2010. Removed puffery. Cut detail such as lengthy product lists. Modest changes to make article neutral. I believe I did not change substance. daveb@dslprime.com happy to share information. I'm a telecom reporter.
- 05:1205:12, 22 May 2019 diff hist −54,658 Huawei See talk page about minor conflict while editing. Reduced 6,000 word article to 3,500. Removed dozens of outdated references, many from before 2010. Removed puffery. Cut detail such as lengthy product lists. Modest changes to make article neutral. I believe I did not change substance. daveb@dslprime.com happy to share information. I'm a telecom reporter.
- 05:0605:06, 22 May 2019 diff hist +752 Talk:Huawei Explained rewrite from 6,000 words to 3,500 words.
12 May 2019
- 23:1923:19, 12 May 2019 diff hist −1,648 Remote surgery Removed outdated network information Tag: Visual edit
8 May 2019
- 05:2005:20, 8 May 2019 diff hist +275 m 5G added 1 citation Tag: Visual edit
- 05:1805:18, 8 May 2019 diff hist +1,086 Talk:5G Update details
- 05:0405:04, 8 May 2019 diff hist −19,475 5G Deleted details of Huawei security issues. There is a (long) separate article on the subject. It is important, but applies to much more than 5G. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:0005:00, 8 May 2019 diff hist −44 5G Numerous updates as we have more results from the field and corporate reporting. Tag: Visual edit
1 May 2019
- 05:4505:45, 1 May 2019 diff hist −25 Americans for Tax Reform Changed "taxpayer advocacy group" to "advocacy group." As the article notes, some believe the organization primarily supports corporate interests. This may or may not be true, but the first sentence of a Wikipedia article should be neutral. Tag: Visual edit
16 April 2019
- 04:4604:46, 16 April 2019 diff hist +239 Donald C. Clarke No edit summary
15 April 2019
- 23:5823:58, 15 April 2019 diff hist +311 Talk:Canagliflozin No edit summary
- 23:5623:56, 15 April 2019 diff hist +1,164 Canagliflozin Added "Other sources recommend Canagliflozin as a preferred treatment for those not adequately controlled on metformin." with 3 references. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5602:56, 15 April 2019 diff hist −80 Canagliflozin Removed non-neutral comment about superior drugs. It has a reputable source but other reputable sources disagree.
14 April 2019
- 23:3823:38, 14 April 2019 diff hist +681 m Talk:5G No edit summary
- 23:3623:36, 14 April 2019 diff hist +363 5G replaced "supercedes" 4G with neutral term "follows." 4G will be important for many years 2025. Reworded claim that 3GPP is a definitive definition, pending agreement with ITU. (India has said they may block 3GPP at the ITU.) Wikipedia should stay neutral while the ITU (part of the U.N) and 3GPP are not in agreemnt. 3GPP is an industry association with essentially no direct or indirect public representation. Almost all countries, many companies, and civil society groups are represented in ITU. Tag: Visual edit
13 April 2019
- 06:4806:48, 13 April 2019 diff hist −298 5G Added Samsung as manufacturer. Rephrased U.S. security concerns in a more neutral manner. minor wording corrections. Tag: Visual edit
12 April 2019
- 01:2301:23, 12 April 2019 diff hist +1,811 Talk:5G Explain major rewrite based on new data from actual deployments.
- 00:5100:51, 12 April 2019 diff hist −19,556 5G Entered actual data as networks go live in the U.S. and Korea. Deleted aspirational and projected data unless tested. Removed out-of-date info. Removed unproven claims and puffery. Tag: Visual edit
19 March 2019
- 09:3009:30, 19 March 2019 diff hist −4,255 C-RAN Removed many out of date references. Changed "future architecture" to just "architecture" because C-RAN is now widely deployed. Tag: Visual edit
7 March 2019
- 06:2606:26, 7 March 2019 diff hist +424 G. Willow Wilson Added new Bird King Tag: Visual edit