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Draft: Neisse Tower

Hey Bkissin, I found four reliable sources about the Neisse Tower in Görlitz. Link: Draft:Neisse_Tower_(Görlitz). I looked through the local library stock in Görlitz and those were everything they could offer. Because the Neisse Tower has been demolished almost 200 years ago, it is really difficult to cover such a topic (for me as well as historians). Can you still accept the draft, as I added reliable book sources? Thank you!

Draft: Battle For Dream Island

The Battle For Dream Island Draft Is Something That Made Me Happy So Approve the Battle For Dream Island Wikipedia Or Get Eliminated... (Please?) — Preceding unsigned comment added by an unspecified IP address

A page you started (Manon Blanchet) has been reviewed!

Thanks for creating Manon Blanchet, Bkissin!

Wikipedia editor MB298 just reviewed your page, and wrote this note for you:

Thanks for creating!

To reply, leave a comment on MB298's talk page.

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Draft: Miss Avakin

Hi. i hope i am not being rude. but you declined my article and i have added references. I am new here so please don't delete simply decline again and i would keep on trying. Thank you

Thanks!! TristanNdianga (talk)

Maccabi USA Wikipedia Page

I cited CharityNavigator on the first paragraph and am still editing the rest of the page. 

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Declined Draft:Aqua Mail is up-dated. Please review it again.

Hi Bikissin,

I have added more reference sourses to the Aqua Mail draft page. Could you please review it again?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Aqua_Mail

Best regards and thank you for your time,

Wiki The Author

16:36 18 September 2018

Declined Draft: Diane Giraud

Hi Bkissin,

My draft has been rejected for Copyright material but I don't see which content you refer to. Can you give me more details? Some content comes from official FB page of the Artist (which is copyright free content) and we got her approval for that anyway.

Thanks for your help, RA

I asked for help.

Question regard Draft:John_Christopher_Muran

Hi Bkissin, I am a doctoral candidate working with Dr. Muran and trying to create a page for him. I have edited the page in response to the comments (i.e. paraphrasing, citation, & publication section). Would you mind take a look when you get a chance to see if it's better now? Thank you! -Di

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:John_Christopher_Muran

Your Reason for Declining Dawn Smith Jordan draft

You said, "Being a Miss America runner-up is not notability..." which seems inconsistent with existing pages on Wikipedia. For example, as I look at the list of other Miss South Carolina winners in Wikipedia, there a number of former winners with their own pages and most have their chief measure of notability as winning Miss South Carolina. Note that you have to win Miss South Carolina to even compete in Miss America, and Dawn Smith was a finalist in Miss America. A good specific example is Ali Rogers (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ali_Rogers). Ali Rogers has nothing more on her page other than winning beauty pageants, the most significant being Miss South Carolina and also was a finalist in Miss America. She did not sing in a Billy Graham crusade, hasn't recorded songs, written books, have an active ministry throughout the United States, and so forth. I intend to continue to add to the draft providing additional items of notability, but the above comment by itself is inconsistent with what I already see approved on Wikipedia. My assumption is it will eventually get approved as I document more, but I contend it should already be approved based on what I see on Ali Rogers' page.

Review

Hello, Bkission. I have seen your reviews about my draft. But in fact, I did not find the same topic with me and all of them pay attention to the whole information, which is not same as mine- use. Thank you

Hi


I believe my article should not have been rejected, I have cited as much as possible. I really need that page to be live for school. Lerato Kganyago or may you please guide me on where Im going wrong cause I dont see anything wrong with my article

Windsor Tablelands

Hi Bkissin,

I've made the changes now for the draft page for review: "Windsor Tablelands", and added a good lead section for the article. Hope this is sufficient! I was also just wanting to ask a question about changing the title of the page, upon greater investigation the geographical location is more commonly known as the 'Mount Windsor Tableland' as opposed to the 'Windsor Tablelands'.

Best Regards, Mcat963

Draft: priyadarshi ranjan article deleted

Nathaniel Phillips Submision Declined

Ok did not know thanks.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Spiceheads

Please can you explain in lay mens English whats wrong with this? Spiceheads is the worlds leading brandname for information, help and advice to the public about NPS, that has sold many pix and videos to News agencys that have been published without accredication. It comes up hits 1,2 and 3 in Google and Bing when you serch the term Spiceheads and has provided cited information, advice and photographs to the Sunday Times. I just do not understand what is wrong, most of it refairs back to the cited main article in Vice and I have asked for help to connect up the citations, but no one has offered. I am both phisically and mentaly disabled, as you should be able to tell by my spelling and grammer. Instead of just rejecting it over and over, why will one of you intelegent accademics help an old guy with dementia? Is it because I am disabled that I am being treated in this way? Or is it the subject matter? All in all I am bewildered in a page that openly says that anyone, can publish or edit somthing, when clearly it is realy anyone with a degree in English that's part of the club. Not having a go at you personally, just very upset, almost suisidal that no one will halp me and I am being treated this way

Regarding outright Rejection to publish an article about a renowned Professor

Hi, Dear moderator Bkissin I have sent a small introduction about a scientist that you have rejected. In my opinion, this is a very and biased action. Rupesh Chaturvedi has contributed much in the medical field that is benefiting to the science community and it will give more benefit in the future. If you are writing an article about a person who has not given anything this world like (I can give you many examples) and at the same time declining a person who has a number of research articles/papers in the famous journal like PNAS, Cell, Nature, present on PubMed cited by approx 50000 times. Besides this as per I know He is the most cited scientist of India's Top Ranked Jawaharlal Nehru university, that you can see Rupesh Chaturvedi google scholar citation. He is also Director of R&D of JNU New Delhi that you can see on JNU website. Rupesh Chaturvedi is in USA Washington DC and already started a Big Startup project in the medical field. It was my first article and now it was last also. Public opinion that I have listened about the biases of Wikipedia, I got it to be correct. This is the respect what we as a researcher get from the common people for whom we worked for day and night.

Thank you very much, Mr. Bkissin Achyut Pandey Research scholar JNU New Delhi

Nathaniel Phillips Submision Resubmitted

He has made a senior appearance for VFB Stuttgart in the DFB Pokal so I have resubmitted the draft. and also added some references.
User:2A02:C7F:9616:2800:414F:2913:8C11:AF64 (talk) 10:52, 14 August 2019 (GMT)

Draft:In Chang-soo

Hi, When do you finish review of Draft:In Chang-soo He definately meets the WP:NFOOTY

Footwiks (talk)

Draft: Zain Ouadah

Hello Bkissin, how are you ?

I just want to tell you that I saw your comment on the :

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Zain_Ouadah

Many boxers have and are still accepted despite these criteria. Several sources have been added in recent days. I really think this boxer is eligible for publication on Wikipedia. I registered on Wikipedia a few months ago and I hope you can review your decision, it would encourage me to create other pages.

Thank you

Andy12349 (talk)

New articles

Dream (Youtuber) Having hard time with source

Dear Bkissin, as you probably know, you decline my draft. I'm doing a page for Dream who is famous for his speedrun world record and his speedrunner vs hunters videos on youtube. I'm have a hard time with the source as I went through about 10 pages in google search and couldn't find any more information other than his Youtube account. Also he has about 9 million Subscribers and about to hit 10 million by the end of this month. If you have any tip for me in the source, please reply as soon as possible. See you soon and have a great week ,Conor Mckinley

Draft:Zvi Yosipovitch

Hi Bkissin,

I just updated my submission for Zvi Yosipovitch so it doesn't read like a memorial. Please re-review. Happy to receive any edits/suggestions you may have.

Thank you!

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Declined :Draft:Queen High Straight (album)

Hi Bkissin,

I have added further references so not just from the artist's webpage. When you have time can you please re-review, and advise on anything else I can do. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Queen_High_Straight_(album)

Many thanks

Kincaide

my draft Prestonplayz was declined

I wanted to create a page for Preston because he is on the famous people on the internet without a Wikipedia page and I can’t find any more sources for him so can you just let it be a live article cuz it took me a long time to research and type up his article

Merry Christmas

Draft:Ending the HIV Epidemic Initiative

Hello and Happy New Year,

Are you able to take another pass to review for submission approval?

Thank you for your help with this.

Johnsones20 (talk)Johnsones20

Jill Barry - Draft - added more sources

You commented that I needed to add more sources to the draft page for Jill Barry. I have since added some. This is my first Wikipedia page, so I'm not totally sure of the process to get something approved. Hopefully I added enough sources. Thanks! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jill_Barry

Luís Raposo (archaeologist)

Hi Bkissin,

The draft has just been reviewd. I followed your comments. I guess it's OK.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Luís Raposo (archaeologist)

My best,

ICOMATIK (talk) 23:50, 05 Fabuary 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Mehdi Barghi

Hello Bkissin, thank you for your comment. I added extra contents and references and will be happy to hear your feedback. Thank you.

Thanks!

Dear Bkissin Thanks for accepting the website of "Universidad del Azuay", our intention is continue working in it. I really appreciate your comments!

Draft:List of Atlas LV3A launches

I noticed that you recently declined List of Atlas LV3A launches and reference the dicussion about what lists of launches to accept, where it was said that we would only accept articles about 10 launches. However, it was also said that a notable rocket list would be accept even if it had less than 10 launches, and the same thing if there was no other article to put the data in. Atlas LV3A count as notaable since according to Space Launch Schedule (https://www.spacelaunchschedule.com/1961-1969_launch_schedule/) and Space Launch Now (https://www.spacelaunchnow.me/launch/). Can you accept it? @Bkissin:

A discussion is taking place at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/Bmcabana_SF

Hello I invite you as an experienced editor, you recently approved an article i submitted for creation Dee Koala, now a discussion is taking place about an article i created, i would kindly like to invite to you to bring your thought about the article, you help is always welcomed, Thank you in advance. Zefu zungu (04::55 PM 03 August 2021) (UTC)

Draft:Agusan del Sur National High School

Regarding this article, there are no more reliable sources that can be found on the internet since the local news or even the national news don't cover much historical background and achievements of such schools in the localities, only the department itself and the school. Therefore, the contributor only relied upon the primary source which came from the school administration. Also, the division tends to keep its records on their archives, not on the internet. If this still doesn't help, the contributor cannot do anything about it furthermore, thanks!

- If ever the contributors find present articles on the internet about the school, will definitely assist in the development of this page.

How do I change the title of an article and get the permission to add album art?

Hi. You just approved my Undercurrent (Matisyahu Album) article. I would like to change the title to just "Undercurrent (album)," since it's a unique album name on Wikipedia, or at least make the a i "Album" lowercase, to fit the format of all album names.

I also don't know how to upload album art to the article, since I have to be a confirmed user, what's the process for that?

Thank you!

Refernces

Draft:Seattle Naval Hospital

Hello Bkissin, I have added more reliable sources to the article, including encyclopedic sources. I hope that the article now meets the notability criteria. Could you kindly re-review the article? Best, Carl Larson

WikiProject SpaceX

Hi. Would you be interested in joining a WikiProject SpaceX? If you are, can you please make a WikiProject proposal for it (I as an IP, can not make the proposal cause I would be stopped when trying to create the proposal page). @Bkissin:

Briggon Snow Draft

This actor is a lead in a slew of fiction podcasts and regarded as a big name in the space. All of the citations, of which they are extensive and from reputable publications and websites, and also including the actor's IMDb and website with audio clips from each role, should be enough to prove the actor's body of work. There are many citations and I'm not sure I understand your question/comment of how to prove the actor's work in podcasts when the proof of a substantial public career in the space has been provided throughout the draft of the article. Guster705 (talk) 17:14, 23 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey! So, I worked with some wonderful helpers and they were able to guide me through dropping and adding citations. What was determined is that Briggon Snow should qualify for WP:NACTOR with these changes. He has had multiple regular roles on notable programs (noted and cited in the article - some of which include a major musical release in "In Strange Woods", and roles in an iHeart Media show and Netflix spin-off, not to mention his lead role in one of the biggest podcasts globally, The Bright Sessions), a recurring role on the Nickelodeon tv show Game Shakers, and has been reviewed and mentioned by Wil Williams which has been determined as a reliable source for the podcast industry from her bylines and interviews in Forbes etc. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Briggon_Snow Guster705 (talk) 15:41, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Manon Claeys

Hello! I saw that earlier today you declined this draft for needing more reliable sources. I've added a few more sources and resubmitted, and I'm hoping you can take another look. Aerin17 (t • c) 23:14, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Renovo Motors

Hi Bkissin, thanks for your review. I've made a pass to upgrade more sources, and to rewrite some of the text to be more neutral. If you reference or cut and paste any phrasing that strikes you as not neutral, I will rewrite or eliminate them. This company seems notable enough to be included in Wikipedia, both for the Stanford MARTY project and in relation to ADAS development by a number of key efforts. I will be happy to make another pass to scrub this further.

Draft: Tarbiat School

Hi, Thanks for comments. I added a book in the Persian language as a reference. The book is titled" History of education in Persia from antiquity to contemporary times". That book is the main and most credited reference for this page. Trekanten (talk) 20:29, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 20:04:19, 1 September 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Mendel baumgarten


hi, i feell that publication of at least a stub article of the locations of the school would be greatly benificial as literaly no information is availeble about it. i have gone through alot of the yidish newspapers of the time - availeble in a searcheble archive at the NLI linked in the article. but i have no experiance in creating a wikapedia artice. i would appreciate very much any help.Mendel baumgarten (talk) 20:04, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Mendel baumgarten (talk) 20:04, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Arnergy

Hello, Bkissin. Hope you're doing great. I need a little help from you and I would be very thankful for that. I've trimmed the article and have removed all the clutter and promotional tone of article in a bid to make it neutral. I am happy if you can further make it neutral by making any kind of changes that make it acceptable. I have re-submitted the article (Draft:Arnergy) and will be waiting for your review. Thanks. Fernande Bonhomme (talk) 14:09, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Soupnism

This to me qualifies as a blatant hoax, but I'm not an expert at either AfC or CSD. Do you have an opinion? A google search on "soupnism" turns up zero, the only source for the draft doesn't use the term. This person just made this term up and decided to try creating an article. —valereee (talk) 17:36, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Matthew McLeod-Allison

I added citation and get rid of some stuff

Draft: Heritage Yak

Hi Bkissin,

I just ran the Heritage Yak article through Quetext https://www.quetext.com/results/941ce5830c5e85983b98 and got about 8 sentences identified. 6 of these are followed by citations. I will shortly rephrase the sentences discussing: "both sexes have long shaggy hair with a dense woolly undercoat to insulate them from the cold. This may form a long "skirt" that can reach the ground." and provide an original citation. Can you give me any other tips to remove your rejection "because it included copyrighted content". Please help.

Warmly, --Skyyak (talk) 05:10, 11 September 2021 (UTC)Skyyak[reply]

Draft:Oliver's Market

Hello, You declined my submission of Draft:Oliver's Market with the reason being that it "reads like an advertisement". This article was written with wording very similar to the third party sources that were cited throughout the article. Could you please give some direction on what specifically needs to be fixed?

Thank you,

Joe Wiecks (talk) 15:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Declined Article

I read your requirements and I have went back and added in a lot more sources, please see again.

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