Talk:Wilhelm Heidkamp
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Date of Death
[edit]According to both sources in the German article, Heidkamp died 1931, not 1926. (Wilhelm Heidkamp im Leverkusener Anzeiger, Wilhelm Heidkamp mit Bild im Leverkusener Anzeiger). Irmgard (talk) 07:49, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- I changed it --Otberg (talk) 22:45, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
Unfortunate phrasing
[edit]"... he would die of consequent lung disease in 1931. After his recovery, Heidkamp continued ..."
I also suggest to mention his heroism in the 1st sentence so that a casual reader wouldn't wonder why that person got dedicated a page. JB. --92.193.146.62 (talk) 02:35, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
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