Wikipedia:Peer review/Yonkers, New York/archive2
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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to hear feedback on how the article is so far before considering any further steps. I did list this article for a similar peer review, but I have since then made changes to the article. I welcome new feedback on how the article looks since the changes were made to it following the previous peer review.
Thanks, The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 22:56, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Comments by AndrewPeterT
Hello, The Cadillac Ranger. I just submitted an article for peer review myself, and I came across this request as I was trying to see how I could alleviate the backlog.
I am interested in geography in general and the New York City metropolitan area specifically. Therefore, I am definitely willing to leave some comments to help this peer review be successful. My actual feedback will come shortly; this message is simply to indicate that intent. AndrewPeterT (talk) (contribs) 18:58, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- To start off, I want to discuss some issues from the last peer review that I feel may not have been adequately resolved:
- There are still some paragraphs with no citations at all, namely:
- In the Northwest Yonkers section, the paragraph starting with
The two-block section of Palisade Avenue between Chase and Roberts Avenues in northwest Yonkers...
- In the Southwest Yonkers section, the paragraph starting with
Southwest Yonkers, traditionally home to African American and white residents, has seen...
- In the Government section, the paragraph starting with
Yonkers, like the rest of Westchester County and New York state, is a Democratic stronghold...
- In the Roads and paths section, the paragraph starting with
Limited-access roads in Yonkers include Interstate 87 (the New York State Thruway) and the Saw Mill, Bronx River...
- In the Northwest Yonkers section, the paragraph starting with
- Were you able to archive all of your sources using IA Bot? I am unfamiliar with this software, so a simple "yes" will suffice to address my concern.
- There are still some paragraphs with no citations at all, namely:
- Please let me know when you have implemented all of these changes. I would be happy to then give you additional input.
- AndrewPeterT (talk) (contribs) 19:15, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hello AndrewPeterT, as a update, I have done added a source to the section about the retail area and the two-block section of Palisade Avenue between Chase and Roberts Avenues in the Northwest Yonkers section. I also managed to archive the sources using that IA Bot feature and tried it for the first time.
- However, I do have a question. Where can I find a source about the limited-access roads in the Roads and paths section? I came across this source and I'm not sure if it's a good source to use. Do you think I should use it or should I find a different source to use? The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 06:23, 7 June 2024 (UTC)