Wikipedia:Peer review/Yonkers, New York/archive2

Yonkers, New York

Previous peer review

I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to hear feedback on how the article is so far before considering any further steps. I did list this article for a similar peer review, but I have since then made changes to the article. I welcome new feedback on how the article looks since the changes were made to it following the previous peer review.

Thanks, The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 22:56, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments by AndrewPeterT

Hello, The Cadillac Ranger. I just submitted an article for peer review myself, and I came across this request as I was trying to see how I could alleviate the backlog.

I am interested in geography in general and the New York City metropolitan area specifically. Therefore, I am definitely willing to leave some comments to help this peer review be successful. My actual feedback will come shortly; this message is simply to indicate that intent. AndrewPeterT (talk) (contribs) 18:58, 1 June 2024 (UTC)

To start off, I want to discuss some issues from the last peer review that I feel may not have been adequately resolved:

1. There are still some paragraphs with no citations at all, namely:
   1. In the Northwest Yonkers section, the paragraph starting with The two-block section of Palisade Avenue between Chase and Roberts Avenues in northwest Yonkers...
   2. In the Southwest Yonkers section, the paragraph starting with Southwest Yonkers, traditionally home to African American and white residents, has seen...
   3. In the Government section, the paragraph starting with Yonkers, like the rest of Westchester County and New York state, is a Democratic stronghold...
   4. In the Roads and paths section, the paragraph starting with Limited-access roads in Yonkers include Interstate 87 (the New York State Thruway) and the Saw Mill, Bronx River...
2. Were you able to archive all of your sources using IA Bot? I am unfamiliar with this software, so a simple "yes" will suffice to address my concern.

Please let me know when you have implemented all of these changes. I would be happy to then give you additional input.

AndrewPeterT (talk) (contribs) 19:15, 1 June 2024 (UTC)

Hello AndrewPeterT, as a update, I have done added a source to the section about the retail area and the two-block section of Palisade Avenue between Chase and Roberts Avenues in the Northwest Yonkers section. I also managed to archive the sources using that IA Bot feature and tried it for the first time.

However, I do have a question. Where can I find a source about the limited-access roads in the Roads and paths section? I came across this source and I'm not sure if it's a good source to use. Do you think I should use it or should I find a different source to use? The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 06:23, 7 June 2024 (UTC)