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GA failed

This article has a long way to go to reach GA, unfortunately

  • I'm afraid this article doesnt even have an opening sentence, let alone a lead
  • The key players section needs to be expanded to a get a more historical perspective of oil politics in the region, rather than just a list of parties to the negotiations
  • When was oil first discovered here
  • Large sections are unsourced with no references
  • The references need to be fully filled out with things like publisher date, author, see {{cite web}} among others
  • The article should not be written in present tense like a live play-by-play sports commentary
  • Why is a fiar use image being stored on commons and used in this article
  • The prose needs to be tightened up substantially
  • The date formats are inconsistent
  • scare quotes:Dr. Abdirahman Farole, is "relieved" of his duty -> POV without a source
  • Sources needed for content that implies invovlement of living people in suspicious deaths
  • Why does it use "$...USD" -> "dollars US dollars"
  • Why are people constantly referred to by their nicknames with quote marks around them

Best regards, Blnguyen (bananabucket) 02:22, 20 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Criticisms

The article is NOT expanding the greater context of the situation is Somali. The fact that Somalia does not have a fully functional government that can legally sign contracts with Oil companies should be stated. Also, it should be stated the prospect of OIL is prelonging the suffering of Somali people for warlords are fighting over these resources. This is a BLOOD OIL. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Abdicrm (talkcontribs) 17:32, 3 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Well first there is no oil yet, bloody or otherwise. Second, Puntland does have a relatively stable government, and these deals were signed with the consent of the national governing bodies as well, ineffective as they are at present. Third, this is a desperately poor part of the world. Are you suggesting they should not be allowed to exploit their natural resources to try and improve their lot in life? Should they have to wait until the outside world deems them "stable" or "transparent" enough to "deserve" that? Because I think you'll find such thinking becomes something of a Catch 22. Further, I don't think it's clear that oil is what's causing the friction between these regions and clans, at lesat not all of it. 128.83.167.129 (talk) 18:57, 8 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Puntland isn't a recogonised country. It's a piece of land taken over by a warlords that pretends to be democratic. Somaliland is more democratic. Puntland has no right to sign a deal. The only one who does is the TFG and half vast majority of the Somali people hate them with pure anger don't believe they are the right ones. Adding Oil to the mix is only going to fuel the tradegy of this nation. Oil in Africa has never been a good thing. In fact having Oil is one of the worsting that can happen to a non arab african nation. It will lead to corruption,instability and coups. Add that to Somali a country which barely exists. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.69.77.223 (talk) 16:47, 14 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

"you predict". Of course you have no way of actually "knowing". And again, the deals were signed with the TFG as well as Puntland's. 128.83.167.129 (talk) 20:07, 2 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]