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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by 86.161.194.33 (talk) at 18:52, 26 July 2009 (→‎Conflict of interest - text added from Oasis Trust IP address: ageement). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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Conflict of interest - text added from Oasis Trust IP address

I have removed the following text from the article:

"Oasis Academies have been established to provide a rich and balanced educational environment catering for the whole person - academically, vocationally, socially, morally, spiritually, physically, emotionally and environmentally. The goal of every Oasis academy is to serve its students as well as to provide a life-long learning hub for the entire surrounding community, including an array of facilities such as adult learning courses, community workers, fitness suites, healthy living programmes, sports courts and a wide range of out-of-hours youth activities. Oasis Academies benefit from the depth and breadth of educational, healthcare, youth work and community experience and resources within the wider Oasis family, as well as from being part of Oasis global family of schools and, more specifically, of its Academies in the UK. All Oasis Academies share in a common purpose, ethos and set of values."

This text was added from an Oasis Trust IP address. It is full of jargon and reads like a PR statement. It lacks a neutral point of view. I have replaced it with an attempt to describe the organisation in a more neutral way - please don't just add this back in. It needs to be neutral. --Rbreen (talk) 19:14, 8 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]


Autochthony writes: - I agree with Rbreen. Further, I suggest that the main article would benefit from a consistency in naming the subject. Is he 'Chalke', or 'Steve'? It varies. 'Chalke' would, I suggest, be better. It also removes any perceived 'my mate Steve' imputations, that I am sure the author would wish not to have present. My Opinion. Autochthony. 1852z, 26 July 2009.