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Green smoothie

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Appears to be promoting a specific brand-name product, rather than a genre; possibly could have been CSD as advert, but as it has survived PROD, I'm bringing it here. All info seems to stem from "annwigmore" and related, promotional sites; I don't see any general notability for the product, beyond primary sources. Maybe I'm wrong, and it can be salvaged to be a factual, neutral article about 'green smoothie' in general rather than promoting this one product? But as it stands, it is quite promotional. Not convinced that Victoria Boutenko is notable, either - this seems like spam in disguise.  Chzz  ►  22:25, 22 April 2010 (UTC


  • I would like to make this as factual and informative as possible. When discussing the discovery or history of green smoothies, there are only two people involved, which makes it difficult to mention a variety of sources. I find it hard to justify calling this subject a product, when anyone can make it themselves. Green smoothies and the high nutritional value of greens are a creditable topic. Please offer more constructive criticism so this article can can be as useful as possible. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Msemeb (talkcontribs) 23:34, 22 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Delete. The article makes specific health claims without adequate justification—that isn't at all encyclopedic. Prose is not neutral in tone. The sourcing and relevance of most of the "History" section is frankly atrocious. It talks about chimpanzees, fallaciously implying that because of genetic similarities, this is relevant to the human diet—then whips out Answers in Genesis to cite a fact about biology. And worse, it makes dubious claims of efficacy and offers offline and self-published sources as references. (Primary sources are appropriate for referencing an undisputed fact or event, but not appropriate for drawing a conclusion. Use independent, reliable, secondary sources instead.) And even if all of that were corrected, what distinguishes this smoothie recipe from all others that enjoy some popularity? Even if sourced reliably, and written well, this would only rate a merge (to smoothie). TheFeds 01:25, 23 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: I concur that this is not a brand-name product. However, it appears to be an inappropriately reverential treatment of the product—which is still poor form for Wikipedia. TheFeds 01:28, 23 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Keep From the information in the 'health components' section it is clear that the properties of leafy greens make a green smoothie different from a regular smoothie, 'lime smoothie' or 'red smoothie'. Due to using a raw ingredient made of chlorophyl this subject is as significant as wheatgrass, green drink and sprouting. The main point of the article is a beverage made with large amounts of blended greens. The nutritional values of greens is supported with secondary sources. msemeb (talk) 2:57, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
  • Keep There are 2120 different videos that appear when searching "Green smoothie" on Youtube, made by many different users. Some of them have over 100,000 views. The green smoothie is definitely a notable phenomenon. More sources have now been added to the article. User:Viriditasblossoming 3:50 p.m., 29 April 2010
  • Comment: Drinking BLENDED greens with fruit to assimilate the nutrients in leafy greens stands as its own topic. You could have 'greens' on their own, however that becomes a much larger and slightly different subject, for example, greens is also an environmental term. Smoothie is a topic, but discussing the nutritional value of edible greens and why they need to be blended would not match the subject. The social prominence of the term 'green smoothies' also gives reason for these two topics to be combined.--msemeb(talk) 9:05, 28 April 2010
  • Keep The Green Smoothie has received significant coverage in multiple reliable sources independent of the subject. Item includes significant references from reliable published sources such as Random House/North Atlantic Books, publishers of the "green smoothie revolution" book. Notability is evidenced by multiple websites and blogs dedicated entirely to the green smoothie, as well as several major recent books. Just a simple Google search makes it quite obvious, it's really beyond a recipe or group of recipes and actually a genre unto its own. Merging article into Smoothies would be somewhat akin to forcing Basketball be sequestered under Ball. Widespread notoriety, adoption and public discussion clearly warrants item's own entry. MrColombo (talk) 02:33, 29 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]