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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by ESerranoAG (talk | contribs) at 16:53, 11 July 2011 (→‎Christopher Calvin Harrison: new section). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Please give me suggestions for the improvement of this article. You are invited to edit this article to make it look better on wikipedia.


Garvitkamboj (talk) 01:42, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Please review this article I wrote on a philosophical concept and help confirm that it is of wikipedia format and standards. Thanks!


Archivingcontext (talk) 04:07, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

National Engineering Robotics Contest I have made this article, as it is one of the most prestigious Robotic competition in Pakistan and their is no info about it in Wikipedia, please give your feeedback here and add any authenticated information

National Engineering Robotics Contest I have made this article, as it is one of the most prestigious Robotic competition in Pakistan and their is no info about it in Wikipedia, please give your feeedback here and add any authenticated information you can it will be great favour

Would like some feed back on this to ensure my subject is "Notable" before continuing with further work on it.

I posted a request here last week while the page was still in my own namespace but no one replied and the entry (along with several others) then disappeared from the feedback page. Alan666wsg (talk) 08:21, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

could you give me feedback on this brief article on 'Good Things in England'?


LambsC (talk) 09:37, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

please provide some feedback on this short article on William - an Englishman. This is just to get the ball rolling on what will hopefully become a more extensive article on the work.


LambsC (talk) 09:39, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

User:Shomikz/NewsByCompany.com

I would request you to review this article.

Shomikz (talk) 09:44, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

User:Shomikz/NewsByCompany.com

Shomikz (talk) 09:44, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Wingroras:Michael_J_Wade Any feedback on the article of a well-known evolutionary biologists would be appreciated. I have also made over 40 edits, and been a user for 4 days now, yet am not able to move the page so that it is an actual Wikipedia page. Any advice on how to move it? Thanks.


Wingroras (talk) 09:46, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Can someone review this article please? There's a few mistakes on the page that need fixing. Thank You


87.232.127.177 (talk) 10:15, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I would like help in expanding this article about the actor/writer/director resident in Belfast, Northern Ireland and his work.


DanielD1980 (talk) 10:51, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I was wondering if anyone could review this article and then remove the unreview tab. Thank you!

Alfred ban (talk) 12:18, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi,

I've just created the ThinkPad W Series page as part of a collection of pages I'm doing on Lenovo products. I've worked to incorporate feedback I've received from the ThinkPad T Series and ThinkPad X Series pages - which I created a few weeks ago.

I'd appreciate a review of the page and any input on what I can to do to make it better.

Trevor coelho (talk) 12:45, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, I'd appreciate a steer as to the feasibility of this article. It's designed for information purposes, not promotional, but I want to check I've managed that before attempting to go live with it. I've included links to existing article that behave similarly and which mention the company about which this article talks to support the creation of this article. Many thanks.


Katiclio (talk) 12:59, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Weinerc07 (talk) 15:26, 11 July 2011 (UTC)== Presbyterian Orthopaedic Hospital ==[reply]


Presbyterian Orthopaedic Hospital in Charlotte, NC

Ko0022 (talk) 13:52, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I am seeking a review on my page at: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carara_%28Run%29,_2009

Mwarsame (talk) 14:01, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gilaliza/Center_for_Women%27s_Justice_Israel My first article, still a work in progress, just looking for direction and feedback, strengths and weaknesses, etc. How far do I have to go before it's ready to go live?

Gilaliza (talk) 15:36, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

A page about Presbyterian Orthopaedic Hospital in Charlotte, NC.

Ko0022 (talk) 15:41, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I just finished working on this, and I'd like some feedback before moving it into article main space. It should be notable, I'm quite surprised an article wasn't created for it already.

3family6 (talk) 16:02, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This is my first submission. I would appreciate any feedback. Thank you.

Pradowick (talk) 16:39, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Christopher Calvin Harrison is a director and choreographer in New York City with a 20-year history of work with such notables as Franco Zeffirelli, Microsoft, and Marc Jacobs.


ESerranoAG (talk) 16:53, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]