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While agreeing with the previous, I have a further two comments:
In the 3rd sentence of the first paragraph, "Beans should be ground coarse..." is not grammatical English. An option is "Beans should be coarsely ground", for example
Similar information is repeated in the first sentence of the second paragraph.