Talk:Entertainment during the Great Depression
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Comment #1
This is my first effort at editing or collaborating on a Wikipedia article. I cleaned up some stray commas and reworded several sentences to be more concise.
The article needs some expanding to include other popular music, films, and especially sports as a form of entertainment -- even though not all ticket prices were cheap. (I just delivered a US History lecture to college students in Malaysia; that's what led me to the article.)
The piece would also benefit from more documenting of facts.
Todd Nelson (talk) 08:15, 8 June 2010 (UTC)
- Agree with all of the above. I added the US History WikiProject template, I'll try expanding on this myself but I hope somewhere over there who's a little more experienced will help out. > MinnecologiesTalk 01:12, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
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The second link in the References section doesn't work. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Als11282001 (talk • contribs) 19:37, 11 December 2011 (UTC)
Essay?
Seems like an essay with all 5 paragraphs and such. I went ahead and removed the conclusion. This is an encyclopedia!
Maybe if someone could add a section on games and such: I don't have time right now :3 20:26, 11 November 2012 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.4.35.41 (talk)
You should merge this
Not sure how wikipedia works, but this should be merged.