Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of international cricket five-wicket hauls at the Sher-e-Bangla Cricket Stadium/archive1

Nominator(s): Ikhtiar H (talk) 08:19, 20 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I had put a lot of hard work to write this article, specially on research. Ikhtiar H (talk) 08:19, 20 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from —Vensatry _(Talk)

Comments

Images need WP:ALT
done Replaced the original caption. Ikhtiar H (talk) 09:31, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Made an alt. Still not sure if I completely fixed it. Ikhtiar H (talk) 07:31, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The caption (of the lead image) says 25 Test fifers.
done Already altered caption. Ikhtiar H (talk) 09:31, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
cricketidea.com, crictotal.com are not RS.
done Removed. Ikhtiar H (talk) 09:44, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Bangladesh cricket team linked twice in the lead.
done Fixed.
"The first Test at this venue took place in 2007, between Bangladesh and India, and the first One Day International (ODI) match was held between Bangladesh and Zimbabwe in 2006" Consider chronologizing the sentence by swapping both clauses.
- done You can check here to see if I did it correctly. Ikhtiar H (talk) 09:58, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"As of February 2016" We are in March 2016
- done Updated. Ikhtiar H (talk) 09:58, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Refs. should be placed either at the end of the sentence or after a punctuation.
- not done Only one of them fixed (see here). A number of lists like List of international cricket five-wicket hauls at the Riverside Ground, List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Dale Steyn, List of cricketers who have taken five-wicket hauls on ODI debut and List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Waqar Younis doesn't follow this criteria, if you are talking about the parameters in the "Result" column. 10:42, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Not sure you understood my comment. I was talking about the placement of references. Anyways, this has been addressed now. —Vensatry _(Talk) 12:12, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

test debut -> Test debut
done Altered. Ikhtiar H (talk) 10:57, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
6 for 74 -> 6 wickets for 74 runs.
done Altered. Ikhtiar H (talk) 10:57, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"At Mirpur, he is also the latest player to take five wicket." This needs to be rephrased.

"As of September 2016, there has been 20 Test match five-wicket hauls at this ground." has -> have. Date needs to be corrected.

"Mustafizur Rahman is the most recent 5 wicket taker at Mirpur, with figures of 5 for 34" This one is awkwardly phrased. We don't use phrases like '5 wicket taker'.
done Replaced. Ikhtiar H (talk) 11:15, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Why is Stuart Binny's record (in the ground) not mentioned in the lead?

The wickets column should sort according to the best bowling figures (with runs as the secondary sort).

not done Again, it is the same on other articles. See the examples back in the seventh point. Ikhtiar H (talk) 11:15, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Again, looks like you didn't get my point. When you sort the 'Wkts' column it should sort according to the 'Runs' column. For eg., 6 for 59 and 6 for 74 should come before 6 for 82. —Vensatry _(Talk) 12:12, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Got it now. Might just take some time to fix the sorting. Ikhtiar H (talk) 17:53, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Vensatry: Thanks for your comments, highly appreciated. Ikhtiar H (talk) 11:30, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Vensatry: Please have a look if the sorting is done perfectly. Ikhtiar H (talk) 14:37, 3 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comment about the name - Why is the article titled 'List of international cricket five-wicket hauls at the Sher-e-Bangla Cricket Stadium' when the name of the ground reads 'Sher-e-Bangla National Cricket Stadium'? —Vensatry _(Talk) 08:52, 4 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Well, I don't really know anything about this. I actually started this article from the red link from the category, "Lists of international cricket five-wicket hauls by ground". Perhaps it was to shorten the title. I was about to move it until I found this article, List of international cricket centuries at the Sher-e-Bangla Cricket Stadium. Will the missing 'national' really create a problem? Ikhtiar H (talk) 09:10, 4 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The name should exactly match with the parent article. Anyways, don't be in a hurry, it can be done once the nomination gets archived. —Vensatry _(Talk) 09:23, 4 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I made some copyedits which were necessary. Feel free to revert/amend if you disagree. —Vensatry _(Talk) 18:58, 4 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"due its location..." -> due to its location
"Sohag Gazi is the only bowler to achieve this record here on Test debut," be explicit that it was a five wicket haul he achieved, it's not too clear at the moment
"Rabada would pick up..." -> Rabada picked up
"Along with this, Rabada would pick up a hat-trick,[17] becoming the first debutant bowler to do so in the process and also his figures of six wickets for 16 runs remains the best by a bowler on debut." This sentence reads awkwardly, I would consider re-wording it.
"Stuart Binny holds the best ODI bowling figures of 6 wickets four runs." missing a word before four

NapHit corrected your comments. Had a hard time with the third one though. Feel free to check them. Ikhtiar H (talk) 07:31, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support happy that this meets the criteria now. NapHit (talk) 17:19, 15 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]