Template:Did you know nominations/Constitution Day (India)
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 21:00, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
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Constitution Day (India)
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Dr. B R. Ambedkar, hailed as Chief architect of Indian Constitution
- ... that from 2015 India is celebrating 26 November as Constitution Day as a part of 125th birth anniversary celebrations of Dr. B. R. Ambedkar (pictured)?
- ALT1: ... that on 125th birth year celebrations of Dr. B. R. Ambedkar (pictured), Government of India declared 26 November as Constitution Day?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Nikos Foskolos
Created/expanded by MohitSingh (talk) and Human3015 (talk). Nominated by Human3015 (talk) at 15:11, 27 November 2015 (UTC).
Article is new enough, long enough, free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. The hook is interesting, its fact is accurate and cited with an inline citation in the article. It is neutral and does not focus unduly on negative aspects of living people but I can see issues with copy-editing. For example in the introduction section Constitution Day also known as Samvidhan Divas, is celebrated in India on 26 November since 2015. The "Celebration" section needs to be re-written. It reads like the celebration is yet to take place. Wikic¤l¤gyt@lk to M£ 12:06, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
- @Wikicology: Thanks for your review. I have fixed problem. Please also review the image. Thanks.--Human3015TALK 14:30, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
- Please check for grammars. I can still see a problem with grammar. For example, you wrote "Constitution Day also known as Samvidhan Divas, is celebrated in India since 2015 on 26 November. You can only use since 2015 had it been we are in 2016. "Since" means "from a past time until now or after a time in the past. I.e "a period of time that has passed after a specific event". I can see that the section on "Celebration" and "Background" had been fixed.Wikic¤l¤gyt@lk to M£ 17:20, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
- @Wikicology: Thanks for your keen observation. I have fixed that problem too. --Human3015TALK 20:28, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
- I worked on the page. Please let me know if you are comfortable with its current state. Wikic¤l¤gyt@lk to M£ 21:36, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks Wikicology for your copy-edit.--Human3015TALK 23:21, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
Good to go. Wikic¤l¤gyt@lk to M£ 05:30, 11 December 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks Wikicology for your copy-edit.--Human3015TALK 23:21, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
- I worked on the page. Please let me know if you are comfortable with its current state. Wikic¤l¤gyt@lk to M£ 21:36, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
- @Wikicology: Thanks for your keen observation. I have fixed that problem too. --Human3015TALK 20:28, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
- Please check for grammars. I can still see a problem with grammar. For example, you wrote "Constitution Day also known as Samvidhan Divas, is celebrated in India since 2015 on 26 November. You can only use since 2015 had it been we are in 2016. "Since" means "from a past time until now or after a time in the past. I.e "a period of time that has passed after a specific event". I can see that the section on "Celebration" and "Background" had been fixed.Wikic¤l¤gyt@lk to M£ 17:20, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
