Talk:Hirtodrosophila mycetophaga
![]() | Hirtodrosophila mycetophaga is currently a Biology and medicine good article nominee. Nominated by AnuBalasubramanian (talk) at 02:57, 2 December 2019 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer.
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 26 August 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): AnuBalasubramanian (article contribs).
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Behavioral ecology assignment
I created the Hirtodrosophila mycetophaga Wikipedia page after noting that there had previously not been one. I found limited information for the page on general information (e.g. description, physiology, etc.) and would love some assistance on these sections in particular. The remaining sections on which I was able to find information include: habitat, food resources, extensive information on mating-- leks in particular, social behavior, and role in conservation. Please provide any and all feedback on the page. Thank you! AnuBalasubramanian (talk) 23:13, 22 October 2019 (UTC)
Hi Anu, this is a really great article! I made some minor grammar/word choice edits and rephrased a few things. I also deleted a statement saying that males on the leks may offer non-genetic benefits, since by definition in a lek they should not be offering any direct benefits to females. Otherwise this was a fantastic article and there really wasn't much to be improved! EllyGrant (talk) 17:09, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi Anu! This is a really thorough, comprehensive entry on this fly! I edited a few grammar and phrasing things as well as linked a few more words throughout the entry to existing Wikipedia pages. I think expanding the "Description" section and adding a "Life History" section would improve the article even further (and adding a picture of the fly)--but otherwise, really nice job! RappaiT (talk) 23:19, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
Hello! This a really well-written article. It has great coverage of several different topics. I made a couple of small changes such as adding a couple of hyperlinks to the article that I felt were necessary for a reader to have to be able to understand certain areas. Moving forward to suggestions I would go back and add citations to the leading section of the article. Sticking to citations, I am not the Wikipedia expert in my group, but I was wondering if it is necessary to cite the same source after every sentence in a paragraph such as the first one for lek behavior. Apart from that, I felt that the article is well written and concise and I cannot wait to see where it goes. Keep up the good work! Srivera2019 (talk) 05:51, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
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