Talk:Masrour Barzani

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Proposed changes to lead

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Hi, I’m replacing my original post here to try to make it clearer.

I've drafted a proposed updated lead in my sandbox. The changes I'm proposing are to:

Start with his role as Prime Minister rather than his Kurdistan Democratic Party membership
Include the terms "autonomous federal" to describe the Kurdistan Region, as designated by the 2005 Iraqi constitution – see timeline at the bottom of this BBC article
Correct "former Chancellor of the Kurdistan Region Security Council" – he's still the Chancellor of the KRSC (see this Kurdistan 24 article)
Correct the June 2019 vote count, which was 87 not 88 (see same K24 article above)
Correct "President Masoud Barzani" – Masoud Barzani is the former President
Include a short career summary sentence – Peshmerga, UK and US education, return to the Kurdistan Region

Let me know if these suggestions are acceptable. Thank you. Halgurd1 (talk) 10:49, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]