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I added a pov tag. Its about a suburb of Damascus and there is nothing here about todays suburb. Its only focused on one thing that really should be a minor subject. --Supreme Deliciousness (talk) 21:05, 23 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think the POV tag is correctly placed here. Maybe {{::expand}} would be a better choice. History is not a minor subject at all. As Pearl Buck said: "If you want to understand today, you have to search yesterday." Chesdovi (talk) 17:14, 24 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The article is not focused on what it should be focused on. Thats a pov problem. Even the first line: "historically a village on the outskirts of Damascus, Syria, is now a suburb of the capital" is problematic. It should say that its a suburb of Damascus, and then more detailed explanation in history. --Supreme Deliciousness (talk) 17:29, 24 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

"the old synagogue was converted into a school for displaced Arabs."

Look at this image that looks recent, it shows no trace of the synagogue being converted into "a school for displaced Arabs". --Supreme Deliciousness (talk) 17:32, 24 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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 :I don't think the POV tag is correctly placed here. Maybe {{::expand}} would be a better choice. History is not a minor subject at all. As Pearl Buck said: "If you want to understand today, you have to search yesterday." [[User:Chesdovi|Chesdovi]] ([[User talk:Chesdovi|talk]]) 17:14, 24 August 2010 (UTC)
 ::The article is not focused on what it should be focused on. Thats a pov problem. Even the first line: "historically a village on the outskirts of Damascus, Syria, is now a suburb of the capital" is problematic. It should say that its a suburb of Damascus, and then more detailed explanation in history. --[[User:Supreme Deliciousness|Supreme Deliciousness]] ([[User talk:Supreme Deliciousness|talk]]) 17:29, 24 August 2010 (UTC)
+== "the old synagogue was converted into a school for displaced Arabs." ==
+Look at [http://joshualandis.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/jobar.jpg this image] that looks recent, it shows no trace of the synagogue being converted into "a school for displaced Arabs". --[[User:Supreme Deliciousness|Supreme Deliciousness]] ([[User talk:Supreme Deliciousness|talk]]) 17:32, 24 August 2010 (UTC)