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Hertford County Public Schools

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Created by JoannaSerah (talk). Self nom at 19:29, 14 February 2013 (UTC).

  • The article has 1342 words, and was started on 14 February 2013, so length and date are fine. The statement about five member board of education in the lead paragraph is not directly cited in the article below. I suggest changing DYK hook to read "that faced with high teacher turnover rates, Hertford County Public Schools helped build teacher housing?" The word "actually" doesn't seem to fit. The article does contain appropriate citations and none of them are "bare." The hook fact is stated in the article and followed by citation to reliable source. There are no images. In general a nice article with only a couple of minor changes would be good to go.Ellin Beltz (talk) 07:37, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
  • Thank you for your comments. I took out "actually" from the hook. Not sure about changing the "five-member" part, because, while there is not a cite that specifically states there are five members only, the cites provided that list the members do only show five. Will check to see if there is anything that specifically mentions "five-member board". -- JoannaSerah (talk) 03:17, 23 February 2013 (UTC)
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