Draft talk:Bjørn Vidø

This redirect is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography articles

Contested deletion

This page is not unambiguously promotional, because... (your reason here) --Vanityorpride (talk) 12:18, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Vanityorpride this is written completely inappropriately. Please carefully read WP:NPOV. Qcne (talk) 12:59, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

can i please resubmit the article i have read the guidelies and got help from a mentor Vanityorpride (talk) 13:04, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I wrote the article in neutral form cause the person has all the criteria for a Wikipedia article , enough references and was written with all the previous reasons for not being published fixed

He is a leader in the industry and deserves a Wikipedia article that will be updated as time goes with more references and award references after it being published

No one paid me to write I saw the person on Google and heard his music seeing that he doesn’t have a Wikipedia article makes it hard for fans or people interested in the person to know more information of the person

Please do accept that the article is published for people to use this as a source of more information about the subject

Contested deletion

This page is not unambiguously promotional, because... (your reason here) --Vanityorpride (talk) 13:24, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Vanityorpride I have undone the rejection and speedy deletion, but this really is your last chance. Qcne (talk) 13:28, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

How does the article look now ?

I rewrote the entire article in a neutral tone using my own words not words from the reliable sources Vanityorpride (talk) 13:30, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

What, no - Wikipedia articles are not meant to be written "in your own words", they should be paraphrasing/summarising reliable sources. Qcne (talk) 13:37, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I did that i mixed paragraph’s so that the article is neutral

please read how it looks now Vanityorpride (talk) 13:40, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

When you paraphrasing your using your own words to summarise the paragraphs found in articles like the one written by Yfm Ghana on Bjorn Vido

please review the article as it is now

I’m sure it meets all criteria and can be published on the main space Vanityorpride (talk) 13:42, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Right, that makes sense, sorry for misunderstanding. It is in the review queue and will get reviewed. Qcne (talk) 13:51, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you

Is possible that you please check the article and suggest how I can have it approved for

WP:General Notability Guideline Vanityorpride (talk) 14:00, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please review the article with the changes I made