Talk:Eleng Luluan

Comments from Group 1[edit]

You can add Wikipedia Link. For example National Nei-Pu Senior Agricultural-Industrial Vocational High School(內埔農工).
Moreover, we think they can provide more information related to Wang Wei-Chang since they have mentioned in the Early life section, and we are curious about his importance in this section.

PennyLin7 (talk) 01:56, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

G2's comments[edit]

We think overall is clear and good. But try to avoid adjectives in your article. Elainehsiehh (talk) 02:03, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from G4[edit]

The description is quite clear but you can consider adding more references to support your content. Also, when mentioning specific artwork in the introduction and work section(Ngialibalibade – to the Lost Myth, Between Dreams, and Flower of Life), you can add immediate citations right after that. Liuliu0404 (talk) 02:13, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

G3's Comments and Suggestions[edit]

Lack hyperlinks for the locations. Khallouangel (talk) 02:21, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]