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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:45, 1 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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That takes me to the Match section. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:20, 3 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's up to the Second half. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:57, 3 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 17:09, 3 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: I think I've looked at all your points now. Cheers  — Amakuru (talk) 13:48, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I'm happy with it all. But one thing is nagging, and it's "It was played between Coventry City and Oxford United, both of League One, and decided the winner of the 2016–17 EFL Trophy, a knockout tournament for the 48 teams in League One and League Two and 16 Category One Academy sides representing teams from the Premier League and EFL Championship. " which is somewhat of a Beowulf-style sentence. If we split this nicely, I think we're done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 19:09, 18 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Amakuru just this final point holding up promotion... The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 08:08, 31 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: apologies, I had completely missed this. I've reworded it into shorter sentences now, let me know what you think. Cheers  — Amakuru (talk) 08:22, 31 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Amakuru yeah, no worries, happy now so promoting. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 08:30, 31 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]