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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:18, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Am reviewing for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 16:18, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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Tournament format

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Prize fund

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  • The highest break and total prize money figures are not mentioned in the WST source attached to the sentences; perphaps use the source "Entry Form – Betvictor European Series – Betvictor Gibraltar Open 2020" alongside "Tournament Prize Money | World Snooker Live Scores"

Summary

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  • "Due to the COVID-19 pandemic several players withdrew from the event. Neil Robertson, John Higgins, Mark Allen, David Gilbert, Stephen Maguire, Ali Carter, Graeme Dott, Noppon Saengkham, Kurt Maflin, Anthony Hamilton, Mike Dunn, Fraser Patrick and Jimmy White withdrew from the event," - think the second sentence can be merged into the first with some minor shortening to get rid of the second mention of "withdrew from the event" in the current second sentence
  • Wikilink the term break to the appropriate article only on the first mention
  • "but fellow three-time champion Mark Selby was defeated by Lyu Haotian." - although accurate, there is no mention Selby was a three-time World Champion in the source attacted to the end of this sentence
  • Kyren Wilson lacking a wikilink on the first mention only
  • "to qualify for the following event, the 2020 Players Championship" - should be 2020 Tour Championship
  • "Wilson defeated Fergal O'Brien on a deciding frame before defeating both Un-Nooh in the quarter-finals" - repetiton of "defeating"
  • "and Mark Williams in the semi-finals 4–0 to reach the final." - 4–0 each to
  • "a bonus of £150,000." - earning a bonus

Qualifying

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Century breaks

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References

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Shall put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 18:43, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]