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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:57, 10 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Could add the nationalities of the finalists in the prose lead, as it seems important enough for them to have those flags in the infobox.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the 1984 event, it became a ranking event" event/event.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The event is the first Triple Crown tournament" presumably "was"?
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "128 participants, 119 players from the World Snooker Tour, and nine" did MOSNUM for comparable figures change while I was out?
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Could link "break" (in "Highest break ") to cuegloss, previous links were to the specific century/maximum articles.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Consider linking seed in the main body too.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "champion Neil Robertson lost" overlinked."
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • " Fergal O'Brien, Judd Trump, and" Trump overlinked here.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "pulsatile tinnitus" is there a link or even explanation as to what this is?
From google - Pulsatile tinnitus is a rhythmical noise that beats at the same rate as the heart and is the sound of blood circulating the body. Can't say I've found a suitable link. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think the comments made about amateurs could warrant a "controversy" section, but it's not essential here for GAN.
I try my best to stay away from controversy sections unless completely necessary. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have on a quick run-through. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 17:17, 10 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]