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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Action of 22 October 1793/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:46, 8 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]


Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 00:46, 8 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Its been eight days - can you let me know what needs doing?--Jackyd101 (talk) 20:23, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Lead and infobox;
    • a lone British Royal Navy ship of the line; what is the need to mention "lone" because the counterpart also had only one ship.
  • They had more, made it clearer.
    • attacked the large French Navy frigate Melpomène off the coast of Sardinia; usage of "large", declaration of frigate gives the reader an idea about ship's size, I don't think a specific mention is needed.
    • In the strength section of infoxbox, insert an {{nbsp}} amid HMS Agamemnon.
  • Section 1;
    • Link Vice-Admiral
    • small 64-gun HMS Agamemnon; usage of "small" may not be required
    • young Captain Horatio Nelson
    • Link Commodore
    • small 28-gun frigate Mignonne and 14-gun brig-sloop Hazard; use of "small"
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 16:55, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Section 2;
    • held a council of war to decided "decide" whether the action should be renewed
    • Everything else looks good
  • Section 3;
    • A comma after "Following the engagement"
    • Everything else looks good
  • The image used doesn't have a valid license. Please do the needful.
  • No plagiarism found. External links OK.
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:31, 18 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 08:09, 26 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]