Talk:Akiko Iwasaki

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Your article is starting to develop very nicely! Your citations look really good, and the background information you have on Akiko Iwasaki is very in depth! All in all with a little more information on her work (which I'm sure you're already working on) your wiki page is put together very nicely. I know to put my picture in, I went to a random wiki page and took the template off of that page, and made a few changes to insert the picture I wanted from the wikimedia site, just incase you wanted to try that route or even take the format from my sandbox that would be okay. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Smkaspr14 (talk • contribs) , 11 May 2015 (UTC)

Instructor Feedback

You have great information in your article and have documented it well. You summary of the research is clear and concise. Please address the following:

Move the research contributions section above the honors section
Add a picture of one of the viruses she studies AND the picture from the Wikipedia DNA vaccination article.
You need to add at LEAST 10 links to other wikipedia articles, such as the articles on each virus she has studied, the general vaccine page, etc.
Add more information to the Infobox (such as education information).
Improve the notable publications section. You should list the publications in a bulletted list with the complete citation typed out and hyperlinked.
If you can find her total citations and total publications numbers that would be good to add. She has an amazing number of publications in prestigious journals.S L Seston (talk) 19:50, 14 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the feedback. I improved my page based on your suggestions. Rothscak (talk) 20:33, 17 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]