Talk:Alsos Mission/GA1

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Reviewer: Σ (talk · contribs) 01:30, 21 February 2012 (UTC)

  • I've taken a quick look at it, and in general it is good. I will add some comments here after reading it more thoroughly. →Στc. 02:26, 21 February 2012 (UTC)


  • ...discern how far the Germans had gone towards creating an atomic bomb. I believe that discern German progress towards the creation of an atomic bomb. reads better.
    • Sounds good. Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:07, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
  • Alsos Mission personnel followed close behind the front lines...capture by the Soviet Union. Seems unnecessarily long. I would try splitting it in two.



Western Europe[edit]




  • There is a single-sentence paragraph at the bottom, although it isn't a major concern.
    • Actually it has two. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:07, 23 February 2012 (UTC)



See also[edit]

  • Please add {{clear}} at the bottom of the section.

Στc. 06:28, 23 February 2012 (UTC)


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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