Talk:Andrea Sisson

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Andreasissonal (talk · contribs) This user has contributed to the article.

vociferous expansion

Cincivideo (talk · contribs) has now twice expanded this article, but with limited success. I'm just here to explain where my edits came in.

There is no reason to remove reliably-sourced biographical claims from this biography, and so the prose re: Pete Ohs has been replaced.
The new Bard College source does not identify Sisson as a graduate. What it does say about her metriculation has now been included.
Regarding the "Chandelier" music video, the cited source is surprisingly opaque in its verbosity. However, reading our own article on the song, and given that Sisson isn't mentioned there anywhere, I agree with its removal. However, then, her opinions on the work aren't relevant to her biography here, but at Chandelier (song)#Music video, so I've removed the prose entirely.
I've removed the Fulbright duplication from the "Personal life" section, as it's more relevant in "Career" for having led to the creation of I Send You This Place.
The Film Independent source doesn't support a claim of permiering Everything Beautiful is Far Away.
The filmography tables are really unnecessary for only two entrants as (a) everything about I Send You This Place and Everything Beautiful is Far Away, as they relate to Sisson, is already in the prose; and (b) the listings for The Vision Quest™, "Everything is New", and "Blue Mountains" are unsourced and now removed IAW Wikipedia:Verifiability.
In the lead, claims to "being known for" anything need to be sourced and included in the body, also IAW the Verifiability policy.

I think that covers everything I changed of Cincivideo's contributions. If not, or if anybody has questions that I didn't address here, please feel welcome to ask and I'll be happy to reply here as soon as I can. — Fourthords | =Λ= | 14:12, 14 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]