Talk:ArtRave: The Artpop Ball/GA1
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 15:57, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- Quite a few dead links
- similar named → similarly named
- Done Snuggums (talk / edits) 20:59, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- Costumes along with choreography had to find a way to make a single, coherent show. → This sounds awkward
- Reworded Snuggums (talk / edits) 20:59, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- Gaga repeatedly placed within the top-ten of the Billboard Boxscore lists for the tour grosses. → Is this as it happened throughout the year?
- Yes Snuggums (talk / edits) 21:15, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- Billboard also listed it as the ninth best concert tour of the year with 76 reported shows. The tour also receive → Also... also
- Adjusted Snuggums (talk / edits) 20:59, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- Later she took → Comma after Later
- Added Snuggums (talk / edits) 21:01, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- were seven dresses → Dresses or outfits?
- I went with "outfits" Snuggums (talk / edits) 21:04, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- completely sold out → You don't need to write completely, because sold out already indicates that no tickets were left
- Removed Snuggums (talk / edits) 21:21, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- In June 2014 Billboard → Comma after 2014
- Fixed Snuggums (talk / edits) 21:10, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- Outcome
On hold for 7 days. — Calvin999 16:56, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review, Calvin999. Take a look now. Snuggums (talk / edits) 21:21, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- Passing. — Calvin999 21:22, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
Congrats! ---Another Believer (Talk) 21:46, 27 August 2015 (UTC)