Talk:Battle of Taegu/GA1
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk) 00:20, 11 September 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
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- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
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- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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Comments
- Following the invasion of the Republic of Korea (South Korea) by its northern neighbor, the Democratic People's Republic of Korea (North Korea) and the subsequent outbreak of the Korean War on 25 June 1950, the United Nations decided to enter the conflict on behalf of South Korea. The United States, a member of the UN, subsequently committed ground forces to the Korean peninsula...
- True but misleading. The United Nations voted to assist South Korea with United Nations Security Council Resolution 83 on the afternoon 27 June. The US had already announced its intention to commit forces earlier in the day.
- Fixed with a different word. —Ed!(talk) 20:16, 11 September 2010 (UTC)
- True but misleading. The United Nations voted to assist South Korea with United Nations Security Council Resolution 83 on the afternoon 27 June. The US had already announced its intention to commit forces earlier in the day.
- Could you change the references to the "24th Infantry" to "24th Infantry Division" or "24th" as the former idiom is used for regiments?
- "Task Force Smith" is referred to without saying what it was.
- "Walker" is referred to without noting that he was Eighth Army commander. Explain and link.
- "General Gay" is referred to without noting his post or correct rank or linking to his article.
- As is General MacArthur, whose first mention is merely "MacArthur" in the discussion of Hill 303.
- "This conprised the largest Air Force operation since the Battle of Normandy in World War II." There's a spelling error. And are you sure about this? Many bombing raids in 1944-45 involved more than 98 aircraft.
- I thought so too, but that is a direct fact taken from a source which I haven't seen contradicted by another source. It probably refers to more than just the number of aircraft involved. —Ed!(talk) 20:16, 11 September 2010 (UTC)
Cheers Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:33, 11 September 2010 (UTC)
- I have responded to all of your concerns. —Ed!(talk) 20:16, 11 September 2010 (UTC)