Talk:Chen Liting/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gabriel Yuji (talk · contribs) 23:59, 9 December 2013 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   The lead doesn't condense all body information. Noting about his life is said in the lead.

   Thanks for your review. I've expanded the lead to include more information about his life and career. -Zanhe (talk) 00:05, 11 December 2013 (UTC)

   I would only say that you forgot to include some about his life in the People's Republic of China that englobes important facts such as the administrative positions he occuped and his imprisonment, etc. If you address this last issue I can pass the article, Zanhe. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 00:59, 11 December 2013 (UTC)

   I've added another paragraph to the lead summarizing his PRC career. -Zanhe (talk) 01:31, 11 December 2013 (UTC)

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   Ok.

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   Ok.

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   Ok.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I only find an issue I couldn't addressed by myself. If you correct it I'll pass it as a GA. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 23:59, 9 December 2013 (UTC)

Passing. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 01:39, 11 December 2013 (UTC)

Thanks very much for your review! -Zanhe (talk) 02:40, 11 December 2013 (UTC)