Talk:Church of Signs and Wonders
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August 2024
[edit]I am about to revert this edit [1] but wanted to open on talk as it appears to be in good faith from a new user. {{U|Raj0008]], welcome to Wikipedia. I looked at your edit and tried to find something to retain. There is more we could do to this page, but O don't think this edit will do. A few pointers:
- We don't use "Dr." or "Apostle" in articles. Just use the name.
- In any case, someone who has an honorary doctorate is not generally referred to as Dr.
- You provided three news articles. These perhaps contain some information we could use, but it is important to place a cited source beside the information it supports. So if we say he is married to Sonia, then we put this ref [2] beside that to show it is verified by that article.
- Most of what you added does not seem to be in the sources. For instance, the 300,000 members you added is not in the source although one source mentions 118,000.
- Numbers are tricky. Where do they come from? We need to look critically at claims in sources. Are they just quoting church publicity?
- We really could do with better articles than these newspapers. Are you aware of any books (not published by the ministry) that discuss it?
- Who awarded the honorary doctorate?
I understand you want to improve this page, but Wikipedia pages are written from verifiable secondary sources, so we would need to hunt those down. Thanks, and happy editing. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 18:31, 28 August 2024 (UTC)