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This article looks great after a quick read-through, though some of the sections seem a little short. Please try to expand it, especially Main Building and History (section lead). More to come soon. Reviewer: Reywas92Talk 02:34, 12 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

(Er, I add comments here?). yes, I'm in the process of gathering more information (I'm allowed to add substantial content during the review, right?)  fetchcomms 03:45, 13 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've added a bit more to the history, but I'm still trying to find more for it and the main building sections, especially with some exhibits.  fetchcomms 04:43, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, of course, that's the whole point of the review. Here are some further comments:

  • There's a misplaced modifier in the first sentence. It implies that the School of Public Service was established by Clinton, but nothing else.
  • Write out NARA so readers know what it means.
  • "Approximately $10 million of which came from Saudi Arabia." is not a complete sentence.

Also work on expanding the info about what's actually inside the Center. Thanks! Reywas92Talk 01:39, 16 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I'll fix the little errors, and I'll add exhibit information as soon as I can find enough.  fetchcomms 22:49, 16 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've added a new exhibits section and done a few minor additions in general.  fetchcomms 02:15, 22 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

That seems adequate. I'm sure there's still more that can be said about the Center, but no article can have it all. This passes the GA criteria, but I hope you continue to improve and expand it and maybe even take it to FLC! Reywas92Talk 22:52, 22 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much! I'm hoping to be able to find a comprehensive book on the subject, but haven't located one yet (I think it's still too new). This has been an excellent first experience for me! Thanks again,  fetchcomms 00:26, 23 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
P.S. I think you mean FAC? lol  fetchcomms 00:28, 23 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]