Talk:Drew Cam/GA1
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 14:04, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
- I'll do this one. Courcelles (talk) 14:04, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
- "finishing inside the Top 20" No caps in Top here.
Done - "she reacts strangely." A bit ambiguous here. Done
- You've got some overlinking of characters and actors, and we don't need to be reminded who plays Drew and Mr. Wick (and Oswald) for a third time in prose. Done
- I think we have an article somewhere that explains "ratings share" that you could link to. Done
- "The webcast attracted the largest online audience watching a streaming media event. " In internet history up to that point? Could be clarified. Done
- " and she thought the audio was poor and out of sync." Earlier you said the webcast had no audio component? Can you clarify what is meant down here? Done
- i"m confused, ref 11 says about the Victoria's Secret show, "which in February drew more than 1.5 million users to a fuzzy-pictured fashion show." If that's right, how did this episode out-perform that?
- This one I had a bit of trouble with, possibly because the ratings source is a little confusing. I added that the webcast out performed the VS show by 500,000 visitors in the ratings section. Please let me know if that's right (or wrong!). - JuneGloom07 Talk 03:17, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
- Ref 5 is dead. Done
- Archive url added to ref. - JuneGloom07 Talk 03:17, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
- That's all from me. Placing on hold. Courcelles (talk) 14:21, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: Thank you for the review. Sorry, that it's taken me so long to get things done. - JuneGloom07 Talk 03:17, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
- I think I see the problem. You're using a Press Release for the streams numbers, and of course, it has chosen to take the most favourable view of Drew Carey, and the least favourable view of the other two streams. "In three half-hour increments, the recent NetAid concert garnered an average 277,000 streams, while the recent Victoria's Secret lingerie model webcast picked up even less streams -- but Drew attracted a sexier 650,000 streams, beating both events " See the problem? They're quoting average streams for the other two shows, while quoting the entire number of streams for Drew. And the other two shows were more than half an hour long; they're just not comparing the same statistic. I'd throw this claim out if all that it cna be based on is a PR puff piece. Courcelles (talk) 03:32, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
- Ah okay. I've removed that claim. - JuneGloom07 Talk 01:07, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: Just realised that I didn't ping you! I think I've resolved everything. - JuneGloom07 Talk 01:15, 12 November 2018 (UTC)
- Nicely done, promoted. Courcelles is travelling (talk) 21:01, 13 November 2018 (UTC)