Talk:Federal enclave

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[1] Addition of this sizable amount of information by an expert is valued, but as Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, the text should be restructured so that it is easily understandable to a layman and conforms to the Wikipedia accessibility guideline, before it can be reincorporated into the article. Especially consider sectioning and wikilinking of the text. Also, and although the term is US-only, US-centric bias should be avoided. The article can not make assumptions about the reader's cultural or geographical background. Whether federal government here refers to the US fed. gov., the German fed. gov. or any fed. gov. in general should be defined in the very first few sentences of the generally concise and summarizing lead, establishing the subject's notability. Please see other articles for reference, or just read Writing your first article.

As development of the article seems to have stalled after the addition of this large chunk of text, I have reverted to a previous version predating the edits by Mr. Haines. You can still continue editing from where you left here. --hydrox (talk) 07:57, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This information has since been successfully incorporated to the article. --hydrox (talk) 02:03, 3 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]