Talk:Fire knife

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WikiProject Dance To-do list:

To nominate at WP:FAC:
To improve to Featured standard:
To nominate as a Good article:
To expand: 18th century dance - 20th century ballet - Bolero - Choreography on Broadway - Dance education - English ballet - Indian classical dance - Italian ballet - List of dance companies - Meg Stuart - Opera ballet - Sasha Waltz - Scotch reel - Set dance - Physically integrated dance
To cleanup: Contra dance - Salsa (dance) - Dandiya - Lead and follow
To unbias:
To check for copyvios:
To merge: List of dancers and List of dance personalities‎ as per AfD discussion
Substubs needing expansion: see /substubs
To destub: Amir Hossain Babu - Canada Dance Festival - Dance etiquette - Flash dance - more
Needing references: Chorus line - specifically verifying that each girl actually started out as a chorine
To create: Broadway dance - Country Western Dance International - Dance and cinema - Dance and society - German folk dancing - Latin swing - Post-structuralist ballet - Push (dance) - Salon dance - Shuffle dance - Swing boogie - World Dance Alliance - Xavier Le Roy - more
Wanted Pics/Graphics: Category:Dance articles needing images

Things that probably need to be fixed

grammatical errors that I've missed, including double-spaces, especially after periods
standardization of the spelling/formatting of "nifo oti" (e.g. in regards to capitalization, spacing, presence of quotation marks) (I understand that, in the Etymology section, there's the version with the glottal stop. By standardization, I mean in the rest of the article.)
more inline citations, especially in the Revival section
organizational issues, such as unnecessary repetitivity
maybe the tone in some parts?
the 4th paragraph in Revival, starting with "Ms. Tavita Vaofi…", may contain unnecessary and/or confusing information

I'm new here, so I don't feel really comfortable doing more than grammatical edits at this time. Perhaps someone who's been here for more than a week could help with this. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ayuskoto (talk • contribs) 22:32, 22 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]