Talk:General Maximilian Veers

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Hi,is see you dont have the height of General Veers ,its is 193 cm.

Greetings Evert van Laar

Keep up the good work!!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 213.93.207.39 (talk)

Sidekick??

I removed the sentence that said Veers was Admiral Ozzel's sidekick. An Imperial Army general isn't a "sidekick" to an Imperial Navy admiral. They are the same rank and in different branches. Maybe what was meant was something like "counterpart", but either way it's not necessary; Veers outlived Ozzel by a long time, and there's no reason to lump them together in the introductory paragraph. Kafziel 15:52, 30 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Writing Style

The style in which this page is written is absurd. It reads like some sort of early 19th century ode to a French military hero. Needs to be edited a lot. Oldkinderhook 19:35, 11 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Redirect

I have redirected this uncited collection of plot summary to the appropriate Star Wars character list. --EEMIV (talk) 13:32, 15 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]