Talk:Ghosttown (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 20:55, 26 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I'm Calvin999 and I am reviewing this nomination. — Calvin999 20:58, 26 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

One dead link
on March 13, 2015 as → Comma after 2015
released onto → release on
as well as compared it → as well as comparing it
In the Background and release section, the picture is making the block quote look like a normal paragraph. Try using the coding on the block quote of "Man Down" so that it forces the block quote to still be indented from the image.
single, "Talk Dirty", → I don't think you need a comma after single?
"Ghosttown"'s → "Ghosttown{{"'}}s (So that the punctuation doesn't blur)
chorus comes it around → typo
According to Musicnotes.com, → I don't think you need this
who transformed the → Reads slightly fan-like
According to Idolator, → Should be linked here and unlinked in Critical reception
In France the → Comm after France
In Italy "Ghosttown" → Comma after Italy
on the tally, → you don't have entries on a tally, you tally on a chart.
from her → since her
She pulled ahead of runners-ups → She's always been ahead of them, so 'further ahead' perhaps?
who have 22 number-one songs each. → Rihanna has 23 now, so this needs to be changed to something along the lines of "at the time"
Along with the Dance Club Songs record, "Ghosttown" debuted at number 38 on the Adult Pop Songs chart, becoming the singer's 19th entry on the list. → Is 19 entries also a record?
Ref 2: Billboard needs linking
Ref 12: Link Slant Magazine, and unlink 40 and 94
Ref 24: Link Idolator
Some sources are in a foreign language? Like 38? Still need a language parameter to inform which language it's in.
12, 62 and 92 have double quotation marks in their title because you need to use ' instead of " in the formatting.

Outcome

On hold for 7 days. — Calvin999 15:34, 27 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Calvin999 and many thanks. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 10:30, 28 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. — Calvin999 10:39, 28 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]