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Unnecessary anecdote and other issues

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It is definitely not needed to mention the injury and situations that followed it. This is irrelevant to the recording information and deviates from the encyclopedic tone a Wikipedia article should have. Also, the mention of "Lawrie" is very unclear - who is Lawrie? It would help to name the members of The Fut in the top paragraph before suddenly referring to them. The citation format is also unclear. In general, I don't think this article flows well or has any sort of stable Sruthijayanti (talk) 01:32, 26 March 2022 (UTC)structure.[reply]