Talk:Hurricane Adrian (2011)

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Needs copyedit and more impact. iPhone Hurricane 95 20:42, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

There is no more impact available and the writing is very good. The MH should be trimed though. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:51, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The MH is good as it is right now, I don't think a trim is necessary. Again, I could be wrong, but I doubt that there is excessive content in the MH. Adrian did have a rather unique synopsis. - HurricaneSpin (Talk) 22:06, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

For the MH, you need the following things

Adding African origins would be nice. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:26, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It is not noted in the TCR, so I have to dig through old SA charts.

"It subsequently acquired enough sufficiently organized structure to be recognized as an tropical cyclone and NHC initiated advisories on the newly formed tropical depression at around 1500 UTC, June 7.[5] Upon developing, the depression was designated as One-E about 365 mi (590 km) south of Acapulco, Mexico.[5]" merge these two sentence and no need for "around" here IMO. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:26, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done

"Later that day, a well-defined eye formed beneath the CDO and cloud tops reached below −80 °C (−112 °F).[12] " how important is this? I'd remove it the layman has no idea what this means. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:26, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done Made an explanation.

Not really done, just remove the sentence. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 00:36, 26 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

", and the upper-level outflow showed no signs of wind shear.[15] " why mention this if there was no shear? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:26, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Because it meant that strengthening is likely.

You mention why it intensified before in the article, so then, that's redudant. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:18, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ok, I reworded it.

Use TCR for formation times and peak times. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:26, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I will get to that later.

Done

"During late that morning, convection associated with the Adrian had lessened and cloud tops warmed.[18]" cut the "cloud tops warmed" part as that is essentially the same thing. Also, change "During late that morning" to "Later that morning". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:26, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done

" Adrian recurved to the west, traversing sea surface temperatures cooler than 26.5 °C (79.7 °F).[" you just mentioned it entered cooler waters above, so why are you mentioning it here. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:26, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done Removed the first mention.

"Around 1500 UTC on June 11, Adrian weakened back into a tropical storm, something not expected to occur so quickly.[22] It was likely due to "an unexpectedly early increase of vertical wind shear coupled with marginal thermodynamics" as noted by the NHC.[22] " just combine these two sentences and make it simpler "Weakening faster than expected due to an unexpected increase in wind shear, Adrian weakened back into a tropical storm midday on June 11".

I will get to that later.

Done

"Soon enough, that evening, Adrian degenerated into a tight swirl of low-level clouds with very limited deep convection. [23]" this happenes every time an EPAC storms weakens, just axe this sentence. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:26, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I can also argue that every EPac storm mentions storms being named and dissipating. It is still a part of the MH regardless.

Try to merge it with another sentence. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:18, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"Adrian still" why "still". I think "However, Adrian" is fine here. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:26, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done Reworded.

"tip of Baja California.[26][27] " You mean the Baja California Peninsula here :P Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:26, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done

Not done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 00:36, 26 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done Oops, now it's done.

- HurricaneSpin (Talk) 23:11, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Check here as it has rainfall totals. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane

Can't seem to find it.

",thus there were no reports of damage or casualties as a result of Adrian" add the word "major" in front of "damage". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane

Done

I'd change "13 meters (4 ft)" to 4 ft (1.2 m).

Done

Swap "Initially, NHC suggested slow weakening could occur due to progressively cooler water temperatures.[19]" with how Adrian was only forecasted to be a Cat 1 first. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane

This was after Adrian became a cat 1.

"Throughout most of June 9, Adrian began transitioning into a annular hurricane, displaying an large eye around 25 miles (40 km) in diameter, circular in shape, and devoid of any convective banding.[17]" can you re-work this to just a large, circular, and cloud-free eye". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane

Done The part about "devoid of any convective banding" was pointing at the rainbands, not cloud-free eye.

Mention when it became a Cat 2 and 3. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 00:36, 26 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Adrian RI'd, so I think that might be redundant.

- HurricaneSpin (Talk) 01:38, 26 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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