Talk:Hurricane Lidia (1993)

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October 25, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 19:41, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"damage totaled to $8 million (1993 USD) was reported." - Why isn't that damage figure on the infobox?
- Added. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"threaten the Baja California Peninsula[6] At 1200 UTC September 21, Hurricane Lidia" - There is no period at the end of that sentence (before reference #6)
- Good catch. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"Heading towards mainland Mexico[1] the hurricane weakened" - you should probably add a comma before reference #1
- Added. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"in which Lida only a mid-level Category 2 hurricane." - Typo
- It's a grammar problem not a spelling issue. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
No, its a typo because Lidia is misspelled.--12george1 (talk) 00:11, 25 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed that. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane
"was issued for areas below La Pza." - another typo
- Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"In addition, one injury were reported." - Grammar error; switch to: "In addition, one injury was reported."
- Shoot. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
In the references, at least add Guiney's first name, which would become John Guiney. [1]
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
In reference #2: "Pasch, Robert;" - "Robert Pasch"? You mean "Richard Pasch"?
- Yeah. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane
In reference #6, a similar problem occurs; "Lawrence, Max" -> "Lawrence, Miles"
- Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
In reference #11: "Pash, Richard J." - typo
- Corrected. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Switch "David Roth" to "Roth, David" in reference #14 to remain consistent with other references.
- Alright. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane