Talk:I Am Not My Hair

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The sentence "She said that she did not want Akon to be featured on the song, without mentioning his name." is ambiguous and should be edited for clarity.

It could mean:

1) "Without mentioning the person's name, she said that she didn't want a male singer to be featured on the song." In other words, the record company forced her to accept another artist on the song against her will.

2) "She didn't want an uncredited, anonymous artist on the song." In other words, she wanted the male singer to be named and credited for his performance.

I don't know which of these two meanings was intended by the original author and hence cannot rewrite the sentence to remove the ambiguity. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 41.161.116.190 (talk) 07:13, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]