Talk:Instinct (Orphan Black)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 12:40, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Grabbing this one for a review over the next couple of days. Miyagawa (talk) 12:40, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Ok, sorry for the delay in reviewing. I'll do it now.

General

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• No duplicate links. Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)
• Dup detector clear. Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Images

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• None to check. Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Infobox

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• Ok. Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Lead

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• Worth adding that it was the first episode to combine shots of Maslany as multiple characters in the same shot. That's a fairly important first for the series. Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• Definitely – added. 97198 (talk) 05:38, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

Plot

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• Ok. Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Production

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• It would be worthwhile moving the mention of Fawcett being the co-creator of the series up to the first mention in the paragraph. Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• Done. 97198 (talk) 05:38, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

Reception

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• No viewing figures? Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• Unfortunately this is the only episode of the series that I or another editor has been unable to find figures for. 97198 (talk) 05:38, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

• No problem, I have a similar problem with some of the episode articles I've worked on. Miyagawa (talk) 12:59, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

• Has season one come out on DVD/Blu-ray yet? It'd be worthwhile making a mention of the home media release of this episode (which I presume would only be as part of the season sets). Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• Yes, the season has been released on DVD but I'm not sure I'll be able to find any sources that mention this episode specifically – is that okay? And would this info fit in the reception section? 97198 (talk) 05:38, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

• Yeah, I wouldn't say it was worthwhile adding a line about the season release after second thoughts - that'd go in the relevent season article. Miyagawa (talk) 12:59, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

External links

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• Ok. Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• All looking good without a great deal of work to have this reach GA. Outside of the review, have you thought of creating an indexing template box? What I mean is something like this: Template:The Big Bang Theory. Miyagawa (talk) 12:22, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• @Miyagawa: Thanks for your prompt review! I've made some changes from your suggestions and have left a query above. I haven't made a template since there are only three episodes with articles as yet – perhaps down the line when the template wouldn't look so empty? 97198 (talk) 05:38, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

• No worries, that's perfectly understandable. Happy to promote. Miyagawa (talk) 12:59, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

• Thanks! 97198 (talk) 21:59, 17 February 2015 (UTC)