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[edit]Certain phrases in the section that I've tagged seem loaded. For example, saying that "rumors and misinformation" have spread surrounding her death reads, even if unintentional, like an attempt to imply that XXXTentacion had no role in her death. The section saying he made the girls leave because he was "concerned about violence" doesn't get the whole story across; he was not concerned about them fighting necessarily, but that any fight they had in his home would jeopardize his probation.
I don't think the whole section needs a rewrite, but minor adjustments in wording may help fix this imo. Delukiel (talk) 14:17, 12 November 2023 (UTC)