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GA Review

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Reviewer: Xwomanizerx (talk) 05:14, 30 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Plies doesn't have a page.  Done

Lead

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  • Airplay is not a format, remove from the infobox.  Done
  • In the first sentence, it should be noted that Beyoncé and Wayne are only featured vocalists on the song. See "Telephone (song)" and "Me Against the Music".  Done
  • The second sentence should be switched with the third, since it's much more important to note the single release.  Done
  • Remove "Usher's label".  Done
  • "Follow up song" -> Sequel, answer song  Done
  • "Number one lead single" seems a little biased, remove "Number one".  Done
  • Information about the actual recording goes before the composition, including the mention of the sample. I'd suggest you expand the lead section a little bit on Usher's comment of the 'shock factor' or his praise of Beyoncé and Wayne.  Done
  • Change "the Billboard Hot 100 in the United States" -> "U.S. Billboard Hot 100".  Done
  • Add (RIAA) after Recording Industry Association of America.  Done

Background

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  • The sample mention should definitely be moved to the composition section, and the writers removed.

Composition

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  • Add (2002) after "Ignition".  Done

Release and critical reception

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  • The release paragraph looks messy, and you should consider moving it to the Background section and let this be a Critical reception section.  Done
  • Add (2007) after "Crying Out for Me".  Done

The other sections look good. Nice work overall! Xwomanizerx (talk) 05:14, 30 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]