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GA Review

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Reviewer: The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 05:03, 7 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'll be reviewing this article. Check out Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for my structural take on GARs. Let's get started. The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 05:03, 7 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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Plot

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Production

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  • Directed by Parker and Stone? The infobox and lead state that only Parker directed it—which one is correct?
  • Delink "Robert Smith" and "The Cure" (already linked in plot)
  • "Smith read all of his lines via telephone and Parker used the first reading of each line, even though they were read in a very dead-pan voice." → "Smith performed[...]they were executed" so it's not "he read the reading and he used the first read which was read[...]" etc.
  • "[...]they were chosen at random. However, they chose[...]" → "chosen at random; however"
  • Wilink to Amendment 2 if possible?
  • Comma after Mary Kay Bergman
  • "[...]monster movie with cheesy graphics." → "cheesy" sounds a bit slangish, wouldn't you say?

Cultural references

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  • Should the character of Mothra be italicized?
  • "This mirror a common element[...]" → "mirrors a common"
  • Filming a scene of what, exactly?
  • I'll continue the rest later...

Reception

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  • ""Mecha-Streisand" was received a 6.9 Nielsen Rating" → Remove "was"
  • Wikilink to Mirabella in Ref 7.

Home video release

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  • Perhaps this should be mixed with reception?
  • I'm kind of confused by the wording of the whole "three-DVD" thing. Were they three separate releases, or three discs? Could use some rewording.
  • "[...]the other twelve[...]" → "other twelve episodes"
  • I'd like to note here how impressed I am by these mostly offline sources. I particularly enjoy the title of "4-disc 'Rings' could take up a whole weekend." Great job finding all these! :)

Images

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  • Weak rationale but acceptable for the notably fitting infobox image.
  • Other two images are freeuse, so no issues there.

Final say

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I'm just gonna skip the full look-over (mostly because I cannot find the template -_-) and pass this. Great work! :) The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 00:10, 13 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]