Talk:Metastatic breast cancer

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page overly technical.[edit]

this page is much to technical form most people to understand.their is no section on symptoms of metastatic breast cancer,and until yesterday there was no section on treatment.because i am a very new user i do not feel comfortable rewriting the article,but if their are any experienced editors with knowledge on this subject,please rewrite the article using less technical language.Immunize (talk) 21:16, 8 January 2010 (UTC)

I agree; I'm trying to copyedit it, and will move the more-accessible sections at the end of the article further up.--Miniapolis (talk) 02:36, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

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