Talk:Model of masculinity under fascist Italy

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is the 3rd sentence wack. or is it just me?

It reads:

"The model represents a mix between purported Roman ideal, comprising both mental and physical qualities."

... A mix between purported Roman ideal and WHAT? Is there something the reader is supposed to know that I don't that implicitly resolves that syntax? Normally within that form, "a mix between ..." entails a set of N items, for N>=2. One does not say "a mix between a car, which has four wheels." One says "a mix between planes, trains, and automobiles.." Perhaps the mix is between the the Roman mental ideal and the Roman physical ideal? If so, perhaps we should change the wording/syntax such that these semantics are more obvious. I apologize for the length of my comment- it isn't exactly Fermat's Last Theorem's margin note. :) Know Einstein (talk) 16:21, 31 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]