Talk:Moonraker (novel)/GA1
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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 10:43, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
Pls excuse my belated commencement on this review, will aim to complete this w/e. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 12:48, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
Hi Ian, No problems at all: I know you've been busy on a couple of other things. - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:38, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
Toolbox check -- No dab or external link problems.
Prose -- My usual copyedit but apart from that:
- "The early chapter of the novel..." -- Sounds a bit odd, usually one would say "The early chapters" and, if it was just one, give the number or perhaps say "An early chapter".
Structure / detail / referencing / supporting materials -- All look good.
See also -- I realise you may do this for all the novel articles but do we need James Bond (character) there when it's already linked in the article?
Summary -- If you can just clarify the minor things above I'm all set to pass this -- well done. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 15:21, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
- Hi there Ian, Thanks for that - it looks much better indeed. I've done the two edits you noted (one of which was a typo). Cheers - SchroCat (^ • @) 16:37, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
- Actually we still have "The early chapter of the novel" and it's now grammatically incorrect with "centre" instead of "centres"... If you can just tell me if it's one early chapter or a number of early chapters that focus(ses) on his private life (I don't have a copy of the book on hand) then I'm happy to word it accordingly and you'll know hat I mean. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 22:56, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
- Apologies - I was editing on a mobile for that one. Now sorted to show a number of chapters. Cheers - SchroCat (^ • @) 06:24, 17 October 2011 (UTC)