Talk:North End Parks

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Confusing

Reconnected Boston to what? It's not clear exactly what "North End Parks" includes. If it's "Parks" plural, shouldn't there be a list of parks? Also, the text reads like it was copied from a real estate website. ("Sun-splashed"? "Formerly an eyesore"?) I'd edit it myself but I don't have enough information. Rosekelleher (talk) 10:25, 30 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I agree that the tone is awkward, and too much of the text is not cited to any RS. I am working to improve it.HouseOfChange (talk) 20:42, 21 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]