Talk:Ocular tremor

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Hello all! I am a student editor who will be editing this article as a project for my advanced writing class. Please reach out to me if I am making any etiquette mistakes, formatting mistakes, etc. I noticed this page is primarily written off of primary sources (including a blog post), which I will be removing. I plan to add information from secondary sources. Please note my plan below:

Remove all current sources that are primary sources (including blog post)
Remove entire section on Simon Cooke - this was from the blog post
Confirm whether article needs to be changed to "Ocular microtremor" instead of "Ocular tremor"
Review current information to see if it corroborates with my secondary sources
- Keep all that is confirmed
- Erase all that is not (investigate for this information in other secondary sources, first)
Write any additional information using the secondary sources I found
- Add in-text citations
- Add in-text links to other articles:
  - nystagmus, parkinson's, MS, microsaccade, eye movements, fixational eye movements
Choose how to divide up sectioning: general intro section, abnormal tremor, related kinds of eye movements (?)
Decide whether to keep current image (is it relevant?)

Please feel free to leave any suggestions! GreenWaterBottle2 (talk) 04:15, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds like a good plan! With respect to the current image, it is relevant, but seems distorted. That is, everything that should be a straight line (like the underlining and the lines on the scale) is not straight. Those distortions probably also changed the waveform of the tremor, which means this probably isn't a real example of tremor anymore (or it's enhanced, or something). ParticipantObserver (talk) 21:59, 8 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 September 2021 and 19 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): GreenWaterBottle2.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 10:18, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]