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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 09:32, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]


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  • I would write that Beyonce is a performer, not singer.
 Not done - I can do this, but it seems a bit iffy. She is a singer first and foremost, just as Jay-Z is a rapper. It is up to you here. ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
She's not just a singer, though. Because she is a dancer, choreographer etc. all the things that she does with the show, it's more accurate to say performer for Beyonce. If it was Mariah, you would say singer and songwriter. If it was Celine, you would say singer. If it was Rihanna, you would say recording artist.  — ₳aron 09:45, 7 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Calvin999:  Done - all complete now! ThirdWard (talk) 10:51, 7 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • State who's solo tour is whose
 Done ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • found in Jay-Z's album → included on Jay-Z's album
 Done ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • in which Beyoncé features. → on which Beyoncé features.
 Done ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Commercially, the tour was a success → The tour became a commercial success,
 Done ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • topping out → totalling
 Done ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Background
  • number one hit → number-one song
 Done
  • "Part II (On the Run)" needs to be linked
 Done ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
 Done ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Promotion
  • April 28, 2014 → comma after 2014
 Done ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Pre sale needs to be hyphenated
 Done ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

On hold  — ₳aron 21:52, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Passing  — ₳aron 10:57, 7 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.