Talk:One Loudoun, Virginia
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Original research?[edit]
@Augusthorsesdroppings10: Do you have a source for the statement,
- The first few years of One Loudoun's history are closely intertwined with that of the planned Loudoun Hounds Minor League baseball team.
As it is, this statement appears to me as impermissible original research, and what follows after it seems to be too much copied from Loudoun Hounds and Edelman Financial Field without proper focus on the subject of this article. -- Pemilligan (talk) 23:26, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
Thanks. That sentence was actually a bit redundant anyway because I had
- shortly before the planned Hounds stadium relocated to One Loudoun.
in the next one. I've deleted the first sentence. Augusthorsesdroppings10 (talk) 20:20, 29 September 2021 (UTC) Augusthorsesdroppings10(talk) 21:19, 29 September 2021 (UTC)